This is the second draft of my video since the last draft I have done some more research and I have looked at existing videos on YouTube and included them in this video, I have also recorded my own voice to put over the video talking about the research I have carried out. In the next draft I aim to have more indepth research so the video has more information and can educate people on the area I am researching.
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I liked the format of your second draft – the videos and your voice over the content was more effective as a delivery method.
Your video is well structure and the content flows well – there is quite alot of information with regards to YouTuber itself – perhaps more than necessary? I feel expanding upon your previous points would be more of a benefit aswell – however the end point that you make is also an area that would be good to delve further into. Just an idea for primary research you could perhaps conduct a survey of people’s opinions – if it turns out not to be 100% useful it may still help you think of other ideas?